The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/11
Hahahahahahaha...Nicely done! This had me smiling all the way through. I enjoyed this. Especially the apology at the end!

Good job. God bless~
11/17/11
I really enjoyed this. It was quite clever. I think I still have that picture book somewhere. It brought back sweet memories.
11/17/11
Lots of energetic word pictures here, and a lot of fun as well.
11/17/11
Well done! Love the rhythm and rhyme and creativity.
11/18/11
Fun, fun, fun read! Creative and clever! I too loved the apology at the end! Great job!
11/18/11
Oh so much fun! I smiled and laughed and cringed all the way through. The rhythm was perfect, but the thought of Spam parfait gives me a shudder :) Really nice job!
11/20/11
I enjoyed this too. Very funny and creative!
11/23/11
I'm still trying to wrap my mind around spam fudge parfaits! I am impressed by the author's fantastic creativity--and managing to make it right on topic. An absolutely fun read!
12/01/11
Woo Hoo for the winners and three cheers for my "pardner"
12/01/11
Congratulations for ranking 8th in Masters and 9th overall! Great job on your EC.
12/04/11
Beth, congratulations on your wins with this whimsically created piece. You surely have a gift for making readers smile with your word-wit. Great job!
12/05/11
I've read this a few times through and the first word that comes to my mind is...DELICIOUS!! And then FUN, and then JUST WONDERFUL!