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11/17/11
This was beautiful and well written. I have cared for dementia patients and quite often they are "lucid" with details - especially things that were of great importance in their lives.

The interaction with father and daughter was precious and done in a tasteful way. It didn't degrade dementia but brought it tastefully to the attention of those reading this entry.

I loved it! Great job on staying on topic while creating a lively and fun read - Clever and nicely done!

God Bless~
This is outstanding. Sad and beautiful at the same time. The dialog is authentic and your story tugged at my heart. You did a nice job of covering the topic with some humor and a lovely conversation. I felt like I was a fly on the wall. Excellent writing.
Chuckle. Really good. God bless you - and Dad!
Gentle, loving, sweet and respectful. A fun read.
12/01/11
I thought their conversation was so enjoyable to read. This left me with a big smile and a warm heart.