The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/11
Oh I loved the ending. Beautiful and so true. Good job with this.

God Bless~
This is lovely. I really enjoyed the ending, I could picture Jesus wrapping his arms around Em.

It may have just been me, but I stumbled over several of the sentences. I don't have any suggestions but wanted to let you know my take.

I think you did a nice job covering the topic while delivering a heart-felt message.
11/18/11
Nicely written story full of vivid detail. I too love the ending. Enjoyed!