The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute, clever and nicely done! I really liked your entry. Nice job. God Bless~
This is a fun fast-paced read that left me with a smile.
I know, right?

You (assuming the MC is you) are so fun and delightful. I loved your rambling voice and I felt like I was sitting accross the table from you soaking in all your energy.

My only comment would be that, in my mind, the email alarm sounds more like "BINGGGG!" than than "BIIIING", but I could be wrong. (And these are the annoying sort of comments my poor challenge buddies are faced with each week.)
Who would think such a wonderful devotional could be born of spam…but you did it! Wonderfully written, great message, great job!
I really enjoyed this entry. I especially like the parenthesis with the insert salesvoice now. I also enjoyed the gimmick approach to comparing and contrasting Christianity with what we receiving on a daily basis.
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level 3!