The Official Writing Challenge
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Good job with this. Nicely written...I enjoyed it. Thank you. God Bless~
I really liked how you broke down The Lord's Prayer line by line. This is creative and fresh. I think many of us will be able to relate to the MC.

You did kind of cover the topic, but it almost felt like an afterthought to me. I think you have a powerful message here and making it fit the topic might have weakened it a bit.

However, I personally have really struggled with these computer topics and I'm impressed that you tackled it and told the message you felt God was telling you to share. Nicely done.
Interesting and creative way to tackle the topic. Enjoyed this.
Ouch! I never quite thought of the unfocused meandering I call prayer as spamming God! I like the way the prayer begins to come into focus toward the end for the supplicant. (By the time I get to the "bread" I either break for a snack or fall asleep.)
A gentle message on perseverence (and the patience of our God). Good take on the topic.