The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/11
Oh, this was really nicely written. I enjoyed it. Adorable play on words, and I loved how the relationship between the grandson and grandmother.

Good job! God Bless~
This was a fun piece. I thought you covered the topic in a fresh way. Iknow you were limited by the word count but it would have more impact if you could develop your characters more. Also in the end you're should be your. Overall, you did a nice job and have a delightful sense of humor.
11/18/11
I loved the plot, yes I say well-developed plot you created in this entry. I did not see the middle action coming! How refreshing to read about a positive application of Spam in this forum of what I can only imagine will be a blood bath fight against Spam.

11/23/11
What a delightful read! So well written and the ending was so cute leaving me with a smile! Great job!