The Official Writing Challenge
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11/04/11
I love the simplicity and wit in this poem. It could be a YA/adult picture book, if there were such a thing. You make a good point in an entertaining way.
11/04/11
Creative and fun to read. Great use of the topic!
This is great. The rhythm and flow is perfect. I smiled at some of the play on words.

My only suggestion is a tiny one. It might be more pleasant to the eye if you divided it into verses and just double-spaced between them.

I think you did an awesome job and are quite creative.
11/13/11
Very creative approach to a destructive issue. Loved the pun you've tucked away in conne-sewer. Very clever.
11/14/11
I love this! Your creativity is off the charts. Your humor is delightful and your message is truly great!