The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/05
For someone who hates flying, this sent a jolt..I do my share of praying then too! You did write this well. It flowed smoothly.
10/26/05
I'm a nervous flier, and you had me gripping the edges of my desk. Great job portraying the tension of this flight! Try to avoid starting sentences with "And..." if at all possible. Happy flying!
I liked the "piece of paper in a dirt devil"."
10/28/05
This is an image of the grace with which we live.