The Official Writing Challenge
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10/27/05
hmmm, a tribute to a raindrop. Work on measures - a little meter counting would help; there is nothing wrong with a stanza of eight lines or more.
10/27/05
The poem seems to be kind of jumpy although you had some great discriptions. The use of the word "You" so much was disturbing to the peice--I think myself would be careful with that. Nice poem though, good thoughts. Keep writing! God bless ya, littlelight
Lots of fun rhyming here that children would especially enjoy.