The Official Writing Challenge
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hmmm, a tribute to a raindrop. Work on measures - a little meter counting would help; there is nothing wrong with a stanza of eight lines or more.
The poem seems to be kind of jumpy although you had some great discriptions. The use of the word "You" so much was disturbing to the peice--I think myself would be careful with that. Nice poem though, good thoughts. Keep writing! God bless ya, littlelight
Lots of fun rhyming here that children would especially enjoy.