The Official Writing Challenge
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10/21/11
I thought this flowed well and I liked the unique use of the contraption to highlight an important truth. It fit well with the topic and the dialogue was believable. Great job!
10/21/11
Oh, I really liked this story. It held my interest from beginning to end. Nice job with staying on topic.
God Bless~
10/21/11
A different and clever expression of the category and good use of dialogue to reveal the story.
10/22/11
Oh, I enjoyed this! It was certainly an out of the box way to present the search engine topic and certainly imaginative! I could picture an inventive boy doing this and then the lesson God showed him through it. In fact, this could very well make a good children’s or early teen book! Well done!
10/22/11
Pretty far out there with this one. Not sure it's really on topic. I found it too unbelievable and a little silly. Has a good message, though.

Mona
10/26/11
This is very creative. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. The message really hit home for me.
10/31/11
An enjoyable read and a unique take on the topic. This is a well written piece with a clear message of what we should do—just get out with people, and be open to what the Lord tells us through the Holy Spirit.
11/04/11
Congratulations for ranking 13th in level 4!