The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/05
A good retelling of the parable. I think we tend to skim over just what the rain fall and the floods are in our lives.
10/26/05
Very nice! The contrast in their lives and choices was well done!
10/26/05
Wonderful, and I love the girls names. Some transitional words would help your readers to see the passage of time more easily. A great lesson, written with a deft hand.
11/01/05
Janet, I'm just popping by to let you know that you did very well in the Rain Challenge, ranking 16th out of 147 entries. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)