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10/21/11
This was a deeply moving story. I was pulled into the whole depth and emotions from the very beginning to the last line. I loved it. Nice job! God Bless~
10/22/11
This is an amazing story! So well crafted, as it moved my mind from scene to scene, building in depth and meaning! I was absorbed in this beginning to end! Great job!
10/22/11
I wasn't clear on what she learned 'for such a time as this'. The dream scene is captivating. I just wanted to understand the depth of her enlightenment.

Mona
10/24/11
My husband is also of the opnion that you should know your roots and has an interest in geneology. I enjoyed the opening paragraphs with their tension. I am not sure that I understood the rest of the story. Was she anticipating a coming persecution?
This was interesting I really appreciated the horror of being German and Jewish, I longer to read more to find out what would happen.