The Official Writing Challenge
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10/21/11
Loved the ending! Nice Job. God bless~
10/21/11
Loved this poem and its message! So true, no man, nor invention of man, can ever offer us what God can! Well done!
10/22/11
Splendid writing. Fully on topic AND getting the a more important message worked in. Easy to read. Good job.

Mona
10/23/11
Love the last stanza! There ARE some things that can't be found online.
This starts out as a fun poem but really packed a punch in the end. Great message.
12/17/11
Wow, Lisa, wow ! Excellent poem.

Made me surf, just reading it.

Two capitals, really?

Just when your swing seemed the thing, you taught what can’t be bought.

The Cross of Calvary, for you and me.