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Creative approach to the topic. Hilarious and believable dialogue from beginning to end.
Very entertaining and - regerettably - very possible.
Nicely done, "this writer says with a smile" I enjoyed it. God Bless~
Oh, this was a riot of a read – loved the imaginative story you spun around the topic! Just a delightful and hilarious read that captivated me beginning to end! Poor Harvey, I fear I may think of him every time I see a new gadget advertised! LOL Applause for job well done on this entry!
This read like A sit-com. You have a delightful sense of humor.
Gosh - what an internet literate wife he had! There was lots of humour about the story - but I did find the lists of things a little long.
Poor guy! This is hilarious!
I liked how you took him from one predicament to another.
The ending was a little weak, but all in all, I loved it.
Mona, you have so many smiles loaded in this. What creativity! I could see this poor husband and his dilemma. :) This is perfect for the topic.
Mona, I'm going to feature this delightful story in the Front Page Showcase for the week of December 19. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!