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This was an interesting read. I liked the reference to the "tower of babel"- A modern day proliferation of todays times. Good job.

God bless~
This is interesting and quite true, I liked how you showed times have changed.
Fun read, as well as thought provoking. I especially liked the line about how our dollar will soon read In Google We Trust. Very clever. God bless!
I have often thought of the Internet as a second Tower of Babel, even though I contribute to the babble. I loved the imagery of brick upon brick. Nice adaptation of the topic
Creative and on topic. I think we have already reached the point where many trust the internet as truth.
Amen! Great thought provoking poem! When mankind relies on knowledge more than God, though that knowledge may be flawed, the knowledge indeed becomes as Babel. Enjoyed this read!
Creative and challenging use of simple rhythm and repetition. Well done.
I remember the days, and the falling and rising of the different search engines. Nice take on the topic. An interesting poem.
I loved this.
I also thought about how the internet (all that information so many have put together) is like the tower of babel.
Very creative.
Great poem! Very creative!

I like how you showed the progression in each stanza. Your repeating stanza kept the beat and thoughts moving steadily on.

The conclusion was excellent.
HC! Congratulations.