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10/21/11
This was an interesting read. I liked the reference to the "tower of babel"- A modern day proliferation of todays times. Good job.

God bless~
10/21/11
This is interesting and quite true, I liked how you showed times have changed.
10/21/11
Fun read, as well as thought provoking. I especially liked the line about how our dollar will soon read In Google We Trust. Very clever. God bless!
10/21/11
I have often thought of the Internet as a second Tower of Babel, even though I contribute to the babble. I loved the imagery of brick upon brick. Nice adaptation of the topic
10/22/11
Creative and on topic. I think we have already reached the point where many trust the internet as truth.
10/22/11
Amen! Great thought provoking poem! When mankind relies on knowledge more than God, though that knowledge may be flawed, the knowledge indeed becomes as Babel. Enjoyed this read!
10/24/11
Creative and challenging use of simple rhythm and repetition. Well done.
10/25/11
I remember the altavista.com days, and the falling and rising of the different search engines. Nice take on the topic. An interesting poem.
10/28/11
I loved this.
I also thought about how the internet (all that information so many have put together) is like the tower of babel.
Very creative.
11/01/11
Great poem! Very creative!

I like how you showed the progression in each stanza. Your repeating stanza kept the beat and thoughts moving steadily on.

The conclusion was excellent.
11/03/11
HC! Congratulations.