The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/11
On topic, for sure. No word wasted and each idea well done. Very well done.

Mona
10/21/11
Beautifully written! I loved this - and the last two lines - WOW!

Brilliant. God bless you~
10/21/11
This is a wonderful poem! It flowed smoothly as it reminded us of the many places on the information highway a search engine can take you…but then it also ends wonderfully as it tells the limitation of a search engine, while reminding us of the limitlessness of God. So well crafted, enjoyable read with great message! Terrific job!
Poems aren't always my thing but this made me smile. You nailed the topic. It started beautifully and intrigued me. The flow was lovely, some of the rhymes didn't feel exactly right, but my ear can't always hear things. You did a beautiful job-
11/03/11
I love how your title alludes to the famous "How many miles to Babylon?" (so perfect for this topic). My favorite stanza here, "For pumpkin pie, new recipe,-- And carrot cake, low calorie," For rhyme, meter, and thought, it doesn't get any more perfect than that. This poem keeps building. I would grade this "Perfect++++"
Congratulations for ranking 14th in level 4!