The Official Writing Challenge
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09/23/11
You've painted a beautiful picture of one of those cameo moments of anointed contact that God sometimes brings our way through total strangers. Very well done.
I thoroughly enjoyed this tender, heart-warming story. Well done.
09/23/11
This is beautiful. There's very little that is as sad as a child being neglected and/or abused in any way. Sometimes I cringe when I hear the way children are spoken to, and it's a piercing reminder to me of my own parenting; am I showing them the face of Jesus? with all my heart I pray that my husband and I do just that. Well done on a beautifully written entry.
09/24/11
Oh, I was so sad for little William but at least he now had the MC praying for him! This was so wonderfully written and just tugged at the heart! Great job!
09/24/11
You illustrated this truth so perfectly----there are no chance meetings when you know the Lord...a heart touching story!
09/26/11
Lovely. So sweet and endearing. This story touched my heart.
09/29/11
A lovely story that touches the heart to make one feel deep within for another, desiring to reach that someone for God in giving our love and care. Excellent writing.
Congratulations for placing 8th in level 3!