The Official Writing Challenge
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What an amazing and wonderful story, so beautifully written. It really touched my heart - and my tear-ducts! Your descriptions are exquisite. Right on topic too. Hope this does really well, it deserves to.
What a delightful mutual friend you have created. Well done.
Wow! You have a beautifully crafted, creative, heartwarming masterpiece right here! I can’t believe you fit all that wonderfully vivid image, emotion and meaning within the 750 word limit! Just awesome job! Kudos!
Great! This one had to leave an impression on the judges. An emotionally packed story with plenty of descriptive details. I like how you juxtaposed the two characters - old, young, a new beginning, a final end. Your subtle introduction of the theme - using the bird as a mutual friend was masterfully done. Also, couldn't help noticing the title. Shows what one can do by leaving out one letter.:-)
From start to finishing line, this was superbly written.
Wonderfully crafted and a delight to read! Ditto on all the previous comments too.
Congratulations Beth - am so pleased this wonderful story was placed.
You already know how I feel about this story. Congratulations on your win!
Congrats! This is one of my favorites. So beautifully descriptive and interesting.