The Official Writing Challenge
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09/22/11
What an amazing and wonderful story, so beautifully written. It really touched my heart - and my tear-ducts! Your descriptions are exquisite. Right on topic too. Hope this does really well, it deserves to.
What a delightful mutual friend you have created. Well done.
09/23/11
Wow! You have a beautifully crafted, creative, heartwarming masterpiece right here! I can’t believe you fit all that wonderfully vivid image, emotion and meaning within the 750 word limit! Just awesome job! Kudos!
09/26/11
Great! This one had to leave an impression on the judges. An emotionally packed story with plenty of descriptive details. I like how you juxtaposed the two characters - old, young, a new beginning, a final end. Your subtle introduction of the theme - using the bird as a mutual friend was masterfully done. Also, couldn't help noticing the title. Shows what one can do by leaving out one letter.:-)
From start to finishing line, this was superbly written.
09/26/11
Wonderfully crafted and a delight to read! Ditto on all the previous comments too.
09/29/11
Congratulations Beth - am so pleased this wonderful story was placed.
09/29/11
You already know how I feel about this story. Congratulations on your win!
10/01/11
Congrats! This is one of my favorites. So beautifully descriptive and interesting.