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09/23/11
This sounds like, and I assume it to be, the two witnesses of Revelation, but not positive. Regardless, this is a superb piece, the lyrical phrases and vivid imagery so immerses the reader; I felt I was standing in that historical place watching the two ancients! Thoroughly enjoyed the read! Great job!
09/26/11
I can't help but try to guess - Peter and Paul or possibly two old saints. Either way enjoyed greatly, could feel the emotion of the years of toiling for Christ. Thanks.
09/26/11
Very nicely done and on target. I could feel the weather worn years and the joy when sharing about their mutual friend. Good job.
09/26/11
Makes me yearn to put on some old dusty sandals and be part of this ancient scene,listening to the two apostles reminiscing about their days with Jesus.Loved the images and the wondering you created in this!
Congratulations one more time this quarter, Jim, on your beautiful poem. You'll have to get this quarter's book--for sure!