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09/23/11
Bet Tim has lots of fun at Halloween with his New England manor near a cemetery, complete with resident ghosts! LOL
Since I donít believe ghosts are the spirits of human loved ones or former occupants, but manifestations of demonic activity to deceive humans, I would be terrified were I Tim! 2 Corinthians 11:14 tells us that Satan and fallen angels are able to disguise themselves as helpful and harmless and would do so to deceive people into thinking there may be an alternative than their spirit going to heaven or hell, upon death.
Of course, I know this was some light-hearted fiction though and in that perspective it was humorous, especially the ďno smokingĒ line!
09/24/11
This was tomb much; and more than I ex-"spectered," but it just ghost to show you how grave life can get.
Entertaining read, with warmth and humour, especially in the closing twist.
09/25/11
"Most of the ghosts left him entirely alone and it is not good for a man to be that way." I love this sort of one-two punch. I have a close personal relationship with a fictional character who spits out this sort of twisted true-but-funny-and-sometimes-sad humor nearly every time she speaks. Just like your MC.

Very entertaining.
Congratulations for placing 7th in level 3!