The Official Writing Challenge
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09/22/11
What a well written, whimsical and witty piece! This would make a terrific children’s story! Thoroughly enjoyed!
09/24/11
What a wonderful story of one friend bringing two others together. Reminds me a bit of Jesus Christ, who breaks down walls of hostility. Great job!
09/26/11
Ah, a nice bit of whimsy. Very nicely done and right on topic.
09/28/11
I'm sticking my neck out and taking on the "riddle" challenge. Would love to know if I got it. What's the prize? :-)
You cleverly used words to tell a story about my favorite sandwich - Peanut butter and jelly. "Brown coat..crunched away" for P.Butler. Slipped,congealed...
for J.L. "Sliced away" for Ry Wheeter and the final clue.."on the (sand which) circled their tiny island."

Creative and entertaining!