The Official Writing Challenge
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This is so powerful, moving, authentic, and beautifully written. Tremendous job!
Ditto Brenda's comments. And, I liked the way you tied the theme in, so nicely woven into the story.
More dittos, as if I could put myself in the MC's shoes.
Wow-wow-wow...this powerfully presented, emotion-laden story brought tears to my eyes! I pray since this is based on actual event, that God will open hearts and allow the desired gift! Outstanding entry!
A moving testimony of love written in a beautiful lyrical style! And a very effective interweaving of the mutual friend throughout the years of this story.
You have revealed the depth of heartache and damaged hopes behind the decisons and the statistics of adoption in such a moving way. I hope this rates well.
Well expressed feelings written all over in this piece. God understands the heartache within. May God extend His hands to all the parties involved with a healing touch to comfort each and everyone.
Glad to see your lovely piece recognized this week with HC win!