The Official Writing Challenge
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09/22/11
This is so powerful, moving, authentic, and beautifully written. Tremendous job!
09/22/11
Ditto Brenda's comments. And, I liked the way you tied the theme in, so nicely woven into the story.
09/23/11
More dittos, as if I could put myself in the MC's shoes.
09/23/11
Wow-wow-wow...this powerfully presented, emotion-laden story brought tears to my eyes! I pray since this is based on actual event, that God will open hearts and allow the desired gift! Outstanding entry!
09/24/11
A moving testimony of love written in a beautiful lyrical style! And a very effective interweaving of the mutual friend throughout the years of this story.
09/24/11
You have revealed the depth of heartache and damaged hopes behind the decisons and the statistics of adoption in such a moving way. I hope this rates well.
09/28/11
Well expressed feelings written all over in this piece. God understands the heartache within. May God extend His hands to all the parties involved with a healing touch to comfort each and everyone.
09/29/11
Glad to see your lovely piece recognized this week with HC win!