The Official Writing Challenge
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09/22/11
Wonderfully woven word images - absorbing read Ė great job!
09/24/11
I love that line, "pouring courage into her empty cup." This is a great tale, well told but not overdone. It's great the way you tied this all together.
09/26/11
Good job. I was engaged throughout. The images were clear and compelling and you were right on topic.
I have not been on the site lately, but I had a few minutes to spare and decided to read a few entries. Your title drew me in and I was not disappointed. These few minutes were well spent!

I loved this line...

"When the young woman gets up to leave, she seems to be in possession of something she didnít have when she came in."
09/29/11
Congratulations! It's always great to read what winners write. :-)
10/01/11
I am not able to write for the challenges at this time, but once in a while I drop in to read them. You did an excellent job with this entry. Well done and congrat!
03/28/12
Sydney, I'm going to feature this awesome story on the Front Page Showcase for the week of April 30. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!