The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting testimonial skit! I couldn’t figure out if Bob was supposed to be a Christian, he was certainly gruff and rude and sort of mean spirited if he was! I found myself not likeing him very much! LOL But enjoyed the read and how it showed the power of God's love to mend.
Very interesting dialogue that covers all the bases, and I liked the touch of vernacular speech as you set the topic so well.
A couple of misspellings: "one-a-doze" implies sleep - even though it's more phonetically accurate than "one-a-dose," (where most of us would harden the "s" sound and thus imply a pharmaceutical meaning!!) "you're gym bag" should be "your gym bag." Sorry to be pedantic, because - tooooo late - I've noticed a typo in my own entry for this week.
Yours humbly, Noel
I am impressed. In such a short span of time, and so few words, you got me to know and like your characters. I felt like I was sitting next to Martha crocheting my own garment, or perhaps I was reading because I don't really know how to crochet, but I wasn't really reading because I was listening to the entire conversation.