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09/23/11
Isn't it sad to have a Common Denominator that we have split into so many denominations - or are they demon-itations? Very salutary, and also very encouraging material.
09/23/11
What a wonderful blessing to know that we are all bound together by the love of Jesus and it never ceases to fill me with joy and wonder of it all when I make that instant “love” connection with another believer, though they are a complete stranger to me! This was a wonderful, blessed read, so well written!
09/24/11
This was a delightful exposition on the tie that binds us, Christ!!
09/25/11
Nice work and a good message that we all need to be reminded of regularly. Thanks!
Great truths here, nicely presented.
09/27/11
What a beautiful picture you've painted here.
This is a nice essay about Jesus. The opening felt a little too rigid for me. Try using some commas and breaking the sentences into a more casual format so it feels like a friend is talking to me. You make some outstanding points and it really did make me stop and think. Your message about diversity is so important especially with the climate of the world today. Even though our cultures and traditions make us different when we look into the night sky we are all seeing the same moon and stars that God created. It makes the world feel a little smaller.