The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/05
Amazing to be able to take a common occurance and turn it into such beauty as you weave a poignant message throughout. Loved this!
10/24/05
Great descriptions, esp. this one- bathed in the amniotic waters ...wrapped in the warmth of the earth’s womb
10/25/05
"...they rest in dreams and wait." I loved that! It feels descriptive of my own life sometimes. Beautifully written!
10/26/05
Beautifully descriptive without entering into the arena of "purple prose." Your word choice is superb. I'd edit out the reference to "I" in the third paragraph; it just seems to interrupt the flow. Wonderful message, well crafted.
Wonderful imagery! Beautifully written.
Wow. You had me from the first sentence. Beautiful article...
10/31/05
Lovely, poignant. Well written and well deserved win. I was drawn by the title, and wasn't disappointed. It is close to pure poetry. God bless ya, littlelight
11/01/05
Helga, your writing always paints a beautiful scene. Congratulations on your well deserved win in the Editors' Choice. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)