The Official Writing Challenge
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Amazing to be able to take a common occurance and turn it into such beauty as you weave a poignant message throughout. Loved this!
Great descriptions, esp. this one- bathed in the amniotic waters ...wrapped in the warmth of the earth’s womb
"...they rest in dreams and wait." I loved that! It feels descriptive of my own life sometimes. Beautifully written!
Beautifully descriptive without entering into the arena of "purple prose." Your word choice is superb. I'd edit out the reference to "I" in the third paragraph; it just seems to interrupt the flow. Wonderful message, well crafted.
Wonderful imagery! Beautifully written.
Wow. You had me from the first sentence. Beautiful article...
Lovely, poignant. Well written and well deserved win. I was drawn by the title, and wasn't disappointed. It is close to pure poetry. God bless ya, littlelight
Helga, your writing always paints a beautiful scene. Congratulations on your well deserved win in the Editors' Choice. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)