The Official Writing Challenge
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09/17/11
Oh what stupid things we sometimes say! Great interaction between the characters and a definite truth about loving everyone came through loud and clear. Nicely done.
We need more teachers who care about the kid as much as the paper they are grading. It is so easy to be proud and pass judgement on others that are different than us. How easily we forget that we are all made in His image. A thought-provoking piece.
I liked your characters. They were both realistic. I've seen them both in real life and heard very similar dialog. You did a great job with this.
09/19/11
Very well written and very realistic. So sad for these special ED kids that they not only have to cope with learning challenges but so often have to also cope with unkind remarks and sometimes being taken advantage of! Teachers like in your story that really care for these children are certainly some of earth’s angels!