The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked your poem, especially stanzas 6,7, and 9. Praising God! Thanks!
Well done, great rhyme scheme, nearly perfect meter, wonderful narrative style. Thanks for this poem!
What a delight! I can hear the raindrops on the roof in it's charming rhythm. Loved it!
Very nice rhythm and rhyme. Thanks for sharing. - Donna
Good rhythm and rhym on this theme of rain.
That was great! I loved the rythmn!
This is a highly skilled and near perfectly constructed poem. I like the way you wove the story and held up the rhyme. Good job.
Great job! I love the rhythm here, too. It almost sounds like rain to read it.
Melanie, you've done it again. The rhythm of this captured the topic perfectly. It was a delight to read. Keep up the great work. Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)