The Official Writing Challenge
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This was an interesting take on the topic and if I'm not mistaken this scene you so aptly described did happen last year or the year before. What a sad sight.
09/17/11
I remember reading about this horrific scene of that poor persons death. This was written well, and very sad reminder of the materialistic world that "most live in."

God Bless~
09/17/11
Oh, this was good. Kept my heart pounding the whole time. I love your descriptions and I love, love, loved the last line.
09/17/11
I remember hearing about this on the news too, about 2-3 years ago…it was just unbelievable to me how any object could be that important to anyone! And I thought after that, how could any of them enjoy their purchases knowing their stampede to get it cost someone their life! This was an extremely well written account of that tragedy and certainly packs a powerful message!! Terrific job!
09/18/11
Very descriptive and challenging approach to frivolous values; and what some bargains can cost.
Congratulations for ranking 12th in level 3.