The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/05
I, too, have experienced extremely vivid double rainbows positioned over a black sky -- a site I will never forget! You have portrayed this beautiful masterpiece very well!
10/26/05
Wonderful description. Short but to the point.You have great word choice.
10/26/05
Short and lovely--this would be very appropriate in a devotional booklet like "Our Daily Bread." I'd rewrite the sentence that begins "Eyes wide and barely breathing...", as it makes it sound like Kurt's eyes are barely breathing. Other than that, wonderful word choice, and well done.
Charming and inspiring!
10/28/05
Short, sweet and to the point.