The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/11
Interesting, exc iting, and well written! Good job! God bless!
This is an interesting story. This normally wouldn't be my favorite genre but you did an outstanding job creating suspense in this well-written piece. It felt like I was watching it unfold personally.
09/17/11
Nice job, very clever! I especially liked the last paragraph and its strong and true message. God Bless~
09/17/11
Excellent story, well written and interesting! I too like the message of the last sentence, a truth we all need to remember!! Great job!
09/19/11
Gripping stuff, and very descriptive approach to a powerful truth.
09/20/11
I enjoyed this creative and descriptive story, right through to the fabulous ending.
Congratulations for ranking 9th in level 3.