The Official Writing Challenge
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09/15/11
Thought provoking...serving as Jesus taught us. Attitude is a choice, isn't it?
09/17/11
A really good story and right on topic. I would love to know more - and to hear if the MC, through prayer and ongoing love, was able to see a breakthrough. Good writing.
This is a very well-told thought-provoking story. The jasmine was a good symbol for the sweetness needed by the nurse.
09/18/11
I agree with and echo all the above comments! I didn’t want this story to end, it felt like I was just getting into it, I too wanted to know more. Oh well, I guess I will just imagine a happy ending for Bonnie and her nurses! LOL Great job!