The Official Writing Challenge
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What a cute story. Made me smile more than once. Good job! God bless!
Funny! I like how you've taken a fun little story, then added a spiritual analogy at the end. Nicely done!
This was hysterical. I was expecting a mouse or a snake. Though the message was a good one at the end it kind of felt like it was added because this is a FW challenge. I think the story was well-written and a fun read. The characters were great ( I thought they might have been angels in disguise) and the dialog realistic.
Good job, nice fun read, with a very important and true message at the end. God Bless~
Loved this light-hearted story, that was such a fun read but has a good message at the end! I was expecting the critter to be a skunk the way they were acting so afraid! LOL Enjoyed!
A good fun entry, with terrific descriptions - loved the face becoming 80% cornea!
Neat little moral tucked in there at the end.
This is so cute. I'll be devastated if it doesn't win something. God bless.
Congratulations. God bless~
Congratulations on your second place win and on your EC!
Congratulations Joey on your well deserved win!
Congratulations on your win.
Congratulations on the 2nd place win for your humorous well written story!
Excellent job ... AGAIN!

I couldn't help but comment on this very cleverly written line:

“O-kay?” Jenkins voice managed to hide a hundred questions within that one word.

That's awesome. :)

Congrats on blasting threw THREE EC's and on to the Masters!!! I'm slightly jealous. Haha!
Joey, I plan to feature this charming story on the Front Page Showcase for the week of March 19. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!
Thanks, Jan. This is completely unexpected. I truly appreciate it.