The Official Writing Challenge
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"Why do we so easily.."? Because we always rely first on what we can do - our actions - ourselves. And it is so difficult to wait. Good comment on life. God bless you.
Very strong start and finish – you know how to turn a phrase. I especially enjoy how you contextualize Biblical stories into our present day experiences, e.g., the meeting that went into overtime.
09/18/11
Excellent! Beginning to end, just outstanding! Old reminders and warnings of man’s failings delivered in fresh, modern, bold language that grabs your attention! Enjoyed the read!