The Official Writing Challenge
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09/15/11
Wow! Very insightful! Great dialog! God bless!
I didn't notice the title at first but still recognized the angel and the town. You did a great job with continuing the story. It's sad that there is so much truth in it.
Small editing note Usually someone would be George Junior OR George the third but not both.

Again I really enjoyed this and think you are quite clever.


09/17/11
Oh, this was so cute. Nice job. God Bless~
09/17/11
Very creative and imaginative, to write your own sequel to the movie, “A Wonderful Life” The truth vividly messaged in this is powerful, though very sad indeed! Outstanding writing and imagery here! Great job!
09/19/11
A very 'Capra'vating, creative approach to the topic. A couple of grammar glitches dent the effect, but only slightly.
I like your imagery and energy, and I would have enjoyed seeing how the angel disarmed some of those who were destroying their town, but overall, great job.