The Official Writing Challenge
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A wonderful example of a life reflecting Christ and the impact on those around. Well written and well done.
The touch of the Master's hand on Miss Moses. This was a delight to read and a wonderful testimony to one person's faithfulness.
09/09/11
Beautiful, could be used as a devotional. I like it. Nice message. God Bless~
09/11/11
You created a delightful authentic character in Miss Moses! I think she deserves some encore stories:)
09/13/11
Such a well written beautiful story! Miss Moses sure did know how to let her light shine! Enjoyed this read very much!
What a character you created. She popped off the page. I could picture the scenes with ease.
09/15/11
Congratulations on your first place win...God Bless~
09/15/11
You captured the cultural characteristics of your MC and did it well. Vivid imagery and "fantabulous" ending with a great take-away message. Congratulations!
I love Miss Moses! You painted a beautiful picture of Jesus in the flesh. Congratulations on a well deserved 1st place win!!
09/15/11
Beth, this is just splendid. For the wonderful story as well as the story-telling ability you display. An excellent choice for #1 and so well-deserved.
09/15/11
Congratulations on your 1st place EC award. Too bad there are not more Miss Moses's out there. Well told story.
09/16/11
Oh Beth, this is wonderful and SO challenging. Miss Moses, and others like her, are contagiously 'drawing' and, as others have said, visibly live Jesus. Thank you so much for such a wonderful story. Huge congratulations on your win - it is realy well deserved.
09/19/11
If only we could all be like your Miss Moses drawing others to Jesus by our love.

Loved the way you portrayed this Moses leading out of a neighborhood wilderness to God's milk and honey. So well done!