The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm sure knowing what Judas knows now he would have gladly chosen a different road. Well written.
09/08/11
Oh, this is good. I like it.
09/09/11
Beautifully done. I truly enjoyed this. God Bless~
09/11/11
The ultimate evil persuasion...great for the topic and very well done!
09/13/11
Excellent poem and I agree with Bryan.
09/14/11
Creative accounting of Jesus' betrayal. Thought I detected a missed beat here: "But if God was on Jesus' side why...

What about "while" instead of "with" in the ninth stanza, third line?

Loved many of the lines; among my favorite -" My enemy was ever earthly." Something about that line that rings true far too often for me today.
09/14/11
Correction: Eighth stanza
I really enjoyed reading this possible POV Congratulations for ranking 10th in Masters and 18th overall.