The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/11
This is such a touching story of Faith, love and prayer. I have tears in my eyes.

Just a couple of suggestions. when you quote a song, add a footnote to give the name and composer. It won't add to your word count. In the text, I couldn't figure out what jp was, but then you did explain it later but it still interrupted my reading as I searched my brain for its meaning.

The message is a great one. It's important to remember that sin is sin there are no little ones. You did a great job with this without coming across as judgmental and preachy.
09/09/11
Great job... I loved it. Thanks for posting this entry. God Bless~
09/09/11
Well written with a good message. I enjoyed reading this.
09/10/11
The last paragraph says it all! Enjoyed the read and loved the visual message of the life changing importance of prayer!