The Official Writing Challenge
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Could picture the entire scene perfectly. I felt the emotion throughout. Very well written.
Outstanding dialog and scene setting. Excellent writing.
09/09/11
Interesting story with some powerful lines. I enjoyed this. God Bless~
09/11/11
Excellent. Loved your believable dialogue. You captured an interesting scene and story.
09/12/11
This was masterfully written, with realistic, powerful scene and dialog! The dead fish analogy so appropriate here! . Poor Heinrich - “There is none so blind as those who will not see!” Great job on this!
09/13/11
This was a very compelling story; the dialogue and setting came through clearly. Powerful and very well done.
09/14/11
Excellent story. The dialogue carried the narrative well and came across as believable. You stirred my emotions.
Well done and some great leading lines. I've heard this expression before but always enjoy reading and seeing how a good writer can use it to flush out a story. You've done it here, good job.
09/15/11
Congratulations on your highly recommended pick...God Bless~