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This is beautiful and similar to a message I was going to write because I felt God telling me the same thing as Patty. I'm glad I went another path because your words really hit my heart and showed me God is indeed trying to tell me something!

I will admit the lack of periods was a tad distracting for me. I think if you had been consistent and either used no punctuation like exclamation points, question marks it might not have distracted me. But I appreciate your style and know it'll work for many people but just wanted to give you my take on it.

The important thing was the beautiful message and the goosebumps down my back as I read it.
09/09/11
Wow...That ending was powerful. Good job. God Bless~
09/10/11
I almost do not know what to say. This was so personal - reading it felt an invasion of the writer’s memories and emotions and of Patsy’s life. So I guess I would have to call that powerful!
09/13/11
This piece gave me tears which still fall as I write this, since the letter perfectly describes a relationship I have with a dear friend, that is, it matches our relationship perfectly until the middle of the letter. And now I think perhaps I should do something before our relationship reaches the end of the letter.



I identified with this piece. My dear friend has been gone for 9 years. I miss her dearly. Great emotional piece.
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