The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/11
Sweet, and a great ending. I liked it. Thanks. God Bless~
09/12/11
Touching and sweet example of true love’s beautiful persuasion!
09/14/11
Wonderful, descriptive writing. I "saw" the scene and felt the love. One little soft whisper...is bight a word?

Love is indeed a great, irresitable persuader. You did a great job showing its power.
09/14/11
Whoops! Which is worse irresitable or bight? :-)

A loud whisper...Irresistible.
This is what the vows for better or worse , in sickness and in health are all about. What a beautiful bittersweet story. Congratulations for ranking 24th overall.
Loren, your beautiful story of a husband's love coming at a time when some might say it's okay to divorce a spouse who's ill, is especially meaningful. I loved the imagery and symbolism of the birds flying against the wind.