The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful!!!!
09/08/11
The scenes described came to life and I felt like I was transported into each one. It builds perfectly to the last stanza.
Lovely! This flowed and the scenes were fresh and inviting. Well done!
09/09/11
Beautiful!
09/09/11
LOVED IT!!!! Fantastic job, I love poems, and especially when they are so powerful as this one clearly is. God Bless you...Wonderful!
09/11/11
Beautiful poem! God's is everywhere communicating his presence and existence and love for those who will see! Thanks for the vision you brought in your poem!
Absolutely beautiful and with such deep meaning!
09/15/11
Conratulations on your win...God BLess~
Congratulations on this lyrically beautiful poem and its high placing!
09/16/11
Gentle and absolutely beautiful. I love each verse and your descriptive third lines! Congratulations - very well deserved.