The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/11
Nice job. God Bless~
09/10/11
Very unusual and interesting poem of inner thoughts and battle of priorities woven back and forth. Interesting effect how the sweet poem within the poem skids off course with lines that try to kill it as it sits within your brain battle. I love the ending, how you humorously let us know with the “pollen dust” what you were persuaded to do. Well crafted! Enjoyed the read!
This is great. I so enjoyed your sense of humor.
09/13/11
This is a very clever and well crafted poem and is bang on for the topic.
I absolutely adore this piece. Ha Ha, you can't ever kill that poet inside you. It just keeps on seeping out of your pores even while you're trying to vacation from it.