The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/11
Sweet story and nice dialogue with the child and her parent. I enjoyed it. God Bless~
This is a sweet story and such a great message. There's actually several good messages and each person who reads it will see the message God wants her to hear.
Well told and very realistic. God bless you.
09/05/11
I really enjoyed this and like Shann, I saw several messages within. But the prominent one that came to me was that though we would all like to stay there, on our mountain-top experiences, we must come down where the vehicle of life awaits to take us traveling a different road. Too few are on the mountain top but so many back in the valleys needs our help! Good job on this well written piece!
09/07/11
Extremely well-written story. Loved the message, the voice of your MC,her family. Great feel-good story. The children in my Children's Church class would like it and the message is brings.
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level 3!
09/12/11
Loved it my friend! Enjoyed the voice you used for the main character. Keep writing and congratulations on your ranking!