The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/11
This was interesting, and of course we know the outcome. God Bless~
09/05/11
Well written account of some great expectations that never happened but believing it helped keep the soldier and his mother able to deal and keep going. I am always sad when I read of the civil war though, it is surly one of the saddest chapters of American history.
This was a brilliant way to capture the voice and thoughts of people involved in a tragic chapter of history.

My only thought is the accent or use of words weren't consistent. For example you used you sometimes ya. I think it would be very difficult to emulate this voice and overall how did am excellent job.
Congratulations for ranking 8th in level three!