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09/02/11
Nicely done! Amen and God bless~
09/03/11
I like this! You did a masterful job of tying together the two races this runner must run. Your descriptiveness really captured my attention. Nicely done!
09/06/11
Enjoyable read with wonderful visual detail…yes crossing that finish line into heaven and hearing God say “well done, my good and faithful servant” will be the only race that matters in the end and bring joy that surpasses any gold medal won here on earth! Great job on this!
09/06/11
Excellent descriptions. I was there and saw the watery sun, the dew, the stretch exercises...all of it. I really liked how you brought into the story the victory which matters most.
09/07/11
Loads of great descriptions, very nicely done!
I love the details in your descriptions. I really felt like I was there. Great story. Also, a reminder to me that I need to get out and hit the pavement myself. :0