The Official Writing Challenge
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Awww, so touching...And, so true, we must release those we love eventually. God Bless~
Simple heartfelt little piece that packs a big punch that most any parent could relate to! It is so hard letting them go, but also exciting to see what God is going to do with their lives! Enjoyed the read!
Good start and strong ending; I would have liked a little more in the middle... I think this story/prayer has room for expansion. That's a good thing though...that I want more!
What a beautiful prayer , so many parents are saying that prayer or a sambas one right now. This is a time of great expectations pride and a bit of fear. You covered it all so nicely.