The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/11
Your last line is very powerful. I enjoyed this. I thought you did a good job portraying your character's anguish and indecision. The ending, with its infusion of hope, was just superb. Great job!
09/04/11
Your descriptions were superb. I could see the road and the gravestones. I thought your use of the shadows was very good and highlighted the change in the man's thinking.























09/06/11
Oh this was so wonderfully and artfully written, so descriptive I felt I was almost walking beside you - one vivid scene after another coming to life! Going from melancholy to the joy of new hope was done so smoothly and masterfully, with incredible grasp of image with that message you sent at the end with the transition of the shadows! I think this is absolutely one of my favorite reads and I hope you place well!
09/08/11
Congratulations on your win! God Bless you~
This is gorgeous writing.I could so clearly see your path and your contemplation and your sorrow. Congratulations on your EC.