The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/11
Interesting story. God Bless~
09/03/11
Catchy title! I was a little lost at the end. Perhaps I should read it again!:) But great writing and an interesting story! God bless!
09/04/11
Love how you have skated around the title with this energetic, absorbing entry. Profiling Cecilia as you have shows real insight and a little self-mocking, which adds to the gentleness of your work. Well done.
09/04/11
I'm sorry, I'll read that again... I meant Celia. just proviong that I never forget a name - even if it's the wrong one!!!
09/05/11
Clever and interesting read! Enjoyed!
This was a fascinating read but such a sad ending. So many of is may try to reach out to someone different, to befriend them only to do or say something insensitive and lose that friend. Amidst your charming humor is a powerful message.