The Official Writing Challenge
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09/02/11
some beautiful metaphors and imagery here...Nicely done. God Bless you~
09/06/11
Simply beautiful! Beautifully written, beautiful images, beautiful message of appreciation and expectation of a new day! Great job!

I would suggest maybe stanza breaks though, to allow the reader to linger more on each wonderful image and thought before moving on.
Your poetry is always so soothing to read - surely it shows the peaceful spirit of the writer. I think I too would liked to have seen a visual break in between the stanzas, but that just a personal preference. Congratulation on your EC.
Such a gift you have, Jim. I always enjoy it, and this one does not disappoint. Congratulations on your EC.